Task 1
| The chart below give the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. |
Sample
The given bar graph shows the number of people working in sales, computers, accounting, nursing, and farming in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008.
Overall, the sales sector employed the majority of people in both years, while the farming sector employed the least number of people. Furthermore, employment statistics in any other industry did not change much between the two years.
In 2001, approximately 150,000 people worked in the sales industry. After then, there was a minor increase in sales employment during the next seven years, with 20,000 more individuals employed in sales. Between the provided time of tenure, personnel in the computer and nursing sectors had similar but minor increases, rising from 50,000 in the former to 70.000 in the former and 60.000 in the latter.
A cursory examination of the remaining data reveals that manpower in the accounting and farming sectors has decreased over time. In 2001, the accounting sector employed just under 60.000 people, with barely a third of them working in agricultural fields. After 7 years, the statistics in the accounting industry remained unchanged; however, in 2008, the farming sector saw an even more inferior level of employment.
Phân tích
Nhìn chung, ngành bán hàng (sales) có nguồn nhân lực lớn nhất trong cả 2 năm, còn ngành nông nghiệp thì ngược lại -> dùng từ ngữ thể hiện sự đối lập; Ngoài ra có thể thấy các ngành khác không có quá nhiều sự khác biệt trong 2 năm.
Đoạn tiếp theo phân tích số liệu ngành sales (sử dụng động từ chỉ sự tăng trưởng); Cùng với đó, ngành máy tính và điều dưỡng có số liệu tương đương nhau nên gom thông tin chung. Đoạn cuối cùng phân tích các ngành còn lại (tăng, giảm, giữ nguyên,…) và sử dụng các mẫu câu khác nhau để thể hiện số liệu.
Task 2
| Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. |
Sample
Academic degrees from institutions are thought to be the best approach to attain goals and gain more success, while some claim that university degrees are not necessary for success. Effective university education, in my opinion, prepares individuals for a brighter future and professional qualifications which would be subjected to careful consideration during the course of this essay.
To commence with, applying to prominent institutions can assist residents in achieving their goals and providing them with the best opportunities to expand their knowledge. Universities have well-known academics with professional knowledge who can assist people in becoming successful. People who have attended universities, for example, have learned practical skills such as communication, time management, and leadership, all of which can have an impact on their future life. Moreover, going to elite colleges, in my opinion, provides students with comprehensive educations that are not available anywhere else. As a result, achieving greater success in life can lead to a more effective university education.
Getting experience or doing something one enjoys, on the other hand, can help anybody become a professional rather than obtaining academic degrees. People may follow their dreams or develop skills that they desire, and these aims can lead to their success. For example, some of the top soccer players in the world do not have any academic degrees, but they put in a lot of effort.
In conclusion, some individuals believe that obtaining prestigious establishments is the best approach to help people become professional people in their life, while others believe that experiences and goals are more significant. Academic education, in my opinion, can help us develop practical skills that will help us achieve greater success in our life.
- Prominent (adj): quan trọng, chủ yếu
- Comprehensive education (n): giáo dục phổ thông
- Prestigious establishment (n): nền tảng vững chắc
Phân tích
Đề bài yêu cầu phân tích cả 2 khía cạnh của vấn đề; do đó mỗi đoạn body sẽ tương ứng với 1 quan điểm. Đoạn body 1 nếu lên tầm quan trọng của bằng Đại học đối với sự nghiệp: Trường ĐH đào tạo không chỉ những kiến thức, mà còn là những kỹ năng cứng/ mềm giúp phục vụ cho công việc sau này; Bên cạnh đó, việc học ĐH có mức học phí cao cũng giúp sinh viên dễ thành công trong cuộc sống vì có khung đào tạo chất lượng mà ít đâu có được. Ngược lại, đoạn body 2 lại nhấn mạnh việc trau dồi kinh nghiệm thực tế sẽ có ích trong công việc (ví dụ về cầu thủ bóng đá). Mỗi luận điểm được bắt đầu bằng những cụm từ chỉ dẫn nhằm định hướng cho người đọc, và được bổ sung bằng những lập luận, dẫn chứng chặt chẽ.
